01-21-2017, 06:12 PM
Hello CRNDLSM,
I enjoyed your poem! The repetition of "Hey rabbit, you look so good" add such a unique touch to the poem. It gives each stanza a pause in the beginning that enables me to wonder whats next.
The first 2 stanzas were very strong and had a nice contrast to each other while they both gave a sense of confusion and shame. After a few more reads I began to understand the 3rd stanza better but at first it was a bit off with the rest of the setting; however, it does make the poem whole with its irony.
Thank you for sharing!
I enjoyed your poem! The repetition of "Hey rabbit, you look so good" add such a unique touch to the poem. It gives each stanza a pause in the beginning that enables me to wonder whats next.
The first 2 stanzas were very strong and had a nice contrast to each other while they both gave a sense of confusion and shame. After a few more reads I began to understand the 3rd stanza better but at first it was a bit off with the rest of the setting; however, it does make the poem whole with its irony.
Thank you for sharing!