A Few Lines Decomposed
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the thrill of watching
trains of thought in transit --
filling in the blanks

[or at least that's how reading this piece feels. I can't say if I actually like this formlessness, only that it is -- and it all sounds good, so I suppose in some ways this is a success]
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A Few Lines Decomposed - by Erthona - 01-16-2017, 09:19 PM
RE: A Few Lines Decomposed - by RiverNotch - 01-18-2017, 03:26 PM
RE: A Few Lines Decomposed - by Lizzie - 01-19-2017, 04:14 AM



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