01-17-2017, 08:44 AM
Very interesting. You definitely play with vulgarity. It seems hateful at times.
I don't think
'winter
is nothing new, she’s been stuck
in my head for months'
I hate winter too. Thanks for posting.
makes sense, even with the mariah carey mention. It doesn't go with the rest of the poem.
'december’s
ugly-girl make up'
it another part that doesn't make much sense.
I don't think
'winter
is nothing new, she’s been stuck
in my head for months'
I hate winter too. Thanks for posting.
makes sense, even with the mariah carey mention. It doesn't go with the rest of the poem.
'december’s
ugly-girl make up'
it another part that doesn't make much sense.
