january
#4
Very interesting. You definitely play with vulgarity. It seems hateful at times.

I don't think

'winter
is nothing new, she’s been stuck
in my head for months'

I hate winter too. Thanks for posting.

makes sense, even with the mariah carey mention. It doesn't go with the rest of the poem.

'december’s
ugly-girl make up'

it another part that doesn't make much sense.
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january - by jrgxng - 01-14-2017, 01:37 AM
RE: january - by Achebe - 01-14-2017, 12:26 PM
RE: january - by UselessBlueprint - 01-14-2017, 04:50 PM
RE: january - by voodoochild - 01-17-2017, 08:44 AM
RE: january - by jrgxng - 01-17-2017, 12:28 PM
RE: january - by Myotis - 01-22-2017, 02:36 PM
RE: january - by mrweiner - 01-31-2017, 08:16 AM
RE: january - by muteyy - 02-26-2017, 02:56 AM
RE: january - by litQueen - 02-27-2017, 11:37 AM
RE: january - by benyamind - 03-04-2017, 07:34 AM
RE: january - by tommyb - 03-13-2017, 05:58 AM
RE: january - by AttnAttack - 03-13-2017, 10:06 AM
RE: january - by Paul Welsh - 04-08-2017, 01:10 AM



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