Father

[billy]

Hey! I would like to thank you guys for remaining loyal and helpful to my posts. You guys have brought my passion, I once had for writing back. While I'm trying new things and less telly ; I feel as if I have improved. Way better and less cliche then what I wrote last year. I have been writing almost everyday and new topics.. But still personal (lol). Furthermore, I know I haven't really commented other poems, it's not that I only care about my work. I just do feel intimated commenting others work . I don't want to give wrongful advise. But I will start commenting and helping. Again thanks a million to all those who help/has help.
- love . Love blind

no probs and don't worry about commenting, no one can say your wrong when you comment. if they do they get a warning you have to comment because by giving feedback to others you begin see fault in your own work
and edits become easier,

i do have one suggestion LB. if you post a few poems at once, try and post them in different forums

and as far as i can see you've really improved since being here.