Misfit Tears Edit #1
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Hello Hope. I would suggest that you cut out all but once instance each of the pronouns used liberally in the poem, and see where that takes you.
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe
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Misfit Tears Edit #1 - by HopeVictoria56 - 01-09-2017, 02:31 PM
RE: Misfit Tears - by Achebe - 01-09-2017, 08:35 PM
RE: Misfit Tears - by ellajam - 01-09-2017, 09:48 PM
RE: Misfit Tears - by MadelineAnne - 01-10-2017, 03:11 AM
RE: Misfit Tears - by hesawacko - 01-10-2017, 06:40 AM
RE: Misfit Tears Edit #1 - by ellajam - 01-10-2017, 09:17 PM
RE: Misfit Tears Edit #1 - by jrgxng - 01-13-2017, 01:33 PM



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