How do you paint a picture with words? Revision

How do you paint a picture with words? Revision

Hkrodgers
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01-05-2017, 03:18 PM

Wow, I love this poem. It reads and flows very well, the descriptive language draws me in and makes me feel connected to the words and an emotion. It would help me as the reader of there was more punctuation to read it I the way you are intending the impact to be on the reader. I hope this helps.

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How do you paint a picture with words? Revision - by Merrikay - 06-13-2015, 02:51 AM

RE: I don't even know what this is.. - by Leanne - 06-13-2015, 05:48 AM

RE: I don't even know what this is.. - by Merrikay - 06-13-2015, 09:35 AM

RE: I don't even know what this is.. - by Forestdawn - 06-14-2015, 05:25 AM

RE: I don't even know what this is.. - by Forestdawn - 06-13-2015, 08:33 AM

RE: I don't even know what this is.. - by billy - 06-15-2015, 09:16 AM

RE: I don't even know what this is.. - by Merrikay - 06-15-2015, 09:46 AM

RE: I don't even know what this is.. - by billy - 06-15-2015, 09:56 AM

RE: I don't even know what this is.. - by Todd - 06-16-2015, 03:58 AM

RE: How do you paint a picture with words? Revision - by Merrikay - 06-16-2015, 04:11 AM