01-05-2017, 01:20 PM
I am not a specialist in poetry. However, I know history quite well. So, my comment is about a context and not about a style. Your composition has very straightforward association with the one well-known 'final solution' from the first half of the last century. Moreover, you even propose to be 'stick to our guns.'
'Remove everything that has no relevance to the story. If you say in the first chapter that there is a rifle hanging on the wall, in the second or third chapter it absolutely must go off. If it's not going to be fired, it shouldn't be hanging there.'© Anton Chekhov
Am I right?
'Remove everything that has no relevance to the story. If you say in the first chapter that there is a rifle hanging on the wall, in the second or third chapter it absolutely must go off. If it's not going to be fired, it shouldn't be hanging there.'© Anton Chekhov
Am I right?