01-03-2017, 03:22 AM
I am a beginner, but to me it seems like the beginning of the poem is a bit weak. It lacks momentum, whereas I feel like it should have a strong beginning to gain the reader's attention.
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Their Fabric is Thread-Bare - by Coquette16 - 12-04-2016, 11:58 AM
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RE: Their Fabric is Thread-Bare - by Quixilated - 12-07-2016, 11:33 AM
RE: Their Fabric is Thread-Bare - by Missy - 12-08-2016, 06:16 AM
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RE: Their Fabric is Thread-Bare - by Coquette16 - 01-03-2017, 10:04 AM
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RE: Their Fabric is Thread-Bare - by It Howls from Below - 01-03-2017, 03:22 AM
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