12-30-2016, 06:54 AM
Hi Dale, thanks for responding. 
Yes, it should have been capped -- I have no excuse.
It......is what it is, I guess. Ha. Do you think I should put it into a poetic form, like a ballad, is that what you were saying?
It's not about pop culture, for sure; it's about things that bind people together and how time passed can be measured by childhood enthusiasms. It's supposed to be a lament of sorts for the feeling of family that we had and for the things that got in the way. But, then, the bulk of it is direct address to her about the pains in her life, which is really more me telling her what I felt about them, so that's not something you can really share with someone else.....fark. I don't know.
Head in a hole.
Yes, it should have been capped -- I have no excuse.
It......is what it is, I guess. Ha. Do you think I should put it into a poetic form, like a ballad, is that what you were saying?
It's not about pop culture, for sure; it's about things that bind people together and how time passed can be measured by childhood enthusiasms. It's supposed to be a lament of sorts for the feeling of family that we had and for the things that got in the way. But, then, the bulk of it is direct address to her about the pains in her life, which is really more me telling her what I felt about them, so that's not something you can really share with someone else.....fark. I don't know.
Head in a hole.