12-27-2016, 08:32 AM
Hi JM,
I love this.
The way you never actually say it. The way the first few lines are a tad ambiguous, but long before the end the image has focused. I love how each line is like a snapshot of the same scene but from a different angle.
Favorite lines:
"Solar powered cyborgs" ... just, yes.
"(brackets brackets brackets)"
"Fatally attracted to sugar" .... me too
And then X, XI, and XII are especially lovely.
A very enjoyable read.
--Quix
I love this.
The way you never actually say it. The way the first few lines are a tad ambiguous, but long before the end the image has focused. I love how each line is like a snapshot of the same scene but from a different angle. Favorite lines:
"Solar powered cyborgs" ... just, yes.
"(brackets brackets brackets)"
"Fatally attracted to sugar" .... me too
And then X, XI, and XII are especially lovely.
A very enjoyable read.
--Quix
The Soufflé isn’t the soufflé; the soufflé is the recipe. --Clara