Exegesis

[Sparkydashforth]

Thanks aschueler,

I'll take 'nice and weird'.
 
Often we stand on such words
like cat's trying not to get paws wet
in a pissing rain.

What?

I found this to be a nice, weird poem.  


 I was very distracted by the second voice, especially with the repetitive what.  And I didnt find it added anything even at the end.

Some other thoughts:  

I am unsure the sun has horns, unless you mean rays from it.  Seems odd.

I really liked the thugs of venus.

Iffy on name dropping Wiltman, as later TS Eliot.

"Fugly" cheapens the poem unforgivably... Find a better word.