12-16-2016, 11:54 AM
Hi, Ro. I really like the dark humor of 'when it's raining' God and the devil are doing this and that. Good subversion of common phrases/cliches.
There are far too many indulgently long lines, and I have no idea how or why this is in short form which is about condensing down to the bare minimum. Unless it's here ironically.....
It could be a nice scene study if you would just pare it down.
All the same: enjoyed it, and all the best to you.
lizziep
There are far too many indulgently long lines, and I have no idea how or why this is in short form which is about condensing down to the bare minimum. Unless it's here ironically.....
It could be a nice scene study if you would just pare it down.
All the same: enjoyed it, and all the best to you.
lizziep