Haiku or Senryu? Edit
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Right when I'd just watch a (solid, but of course armchair-academic) review of a very meta video game. My one issue with this is I can't be sure whether "the winter soltice" is intentional, which is the one truly annoying part of an otherwise very interesting experience. BUUUT considering what you do with Knight, then looking at how dukealien reviewed your work, I'd say the annoyance is a part of it? Basically, a work that literally defies criticism -- and though I appreciate that, I cannot in good faith call it lovely (NOT "especially in a critical forum", since this is at least a not-entirely critical section of the forum). I'll just go with interesting. Interesting. Smile
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Haiku or Senryu? Edit - by CRNDLSM - 12-11-2016, 11:46 PM
RE: Haiku or Senryu? - by dukealien - 12-12-2016, 12:04 AM
RE: Haiku or Senryu? - by CRNDLSM - 12-12-2016, 12:23 AM
RE: Haiku or Senryu? - by RiverNotch - 12-12-2016, 02:07 AM
RE: Haiku or Senryu? Edit - by CRNDLSM - 12-12-2016, 09:10 PM
RE: Haiku or Senryu? Edit - by dukealien - 12-12-2016, 11:09 PM



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