Haiku or Senryu? Edit
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(12-11-2016, 11:46 PM)CRNDLSM Wrote:  'The Winter Soltice':
nickname for the longest (k)night.
Haiku or senryu?
No(h).

Being no authority on this, but logically, removing the self-referential last line leaves neither.  "Nickname" would make it about people while 'Winter Sol[s]tice' in quotes is only a name, not a seasonal reference... so if we must, senryu.  But, IMHO, we mustn't.
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Haiku or Senryu? Edit - by CRNDLSM - 12-11-2016, 11:46 PM
RE: Haiku or Senryu? - by dukealien - 12-12-2016, 12:04 AM
RE: Haiku or Senryu? - by CRNDLSM - 12-12-2016, 12:23 AM
RE: Haiku or Senryu? - by RiverNotch - 12-12-2016, 02:07 AM
RE: Haiku or Senryu? Edit - by CRNDLSM - 12-12-2016, 09:10 PM
RE: Haiku or Senryu? Edit - by dukealien - 12-12-2016, 11:09 PM



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