I Wonder

[Missy]

I'm actually sort of embarrassed to tell what the poem means or the image I was using lol. Anyways, I'm not sure my poem means anything serious either. I was just using an image in my mind and trying to capture a moment of something interesting to me. That's what I do for most of my poetry. In this poem, I was actually thinking of the image of smoking. I wanted to capture that image of blowing out smoke, and then literally sucking it back in. On a side note, I don't actually smoke, and I have no idea how it works. I was just curious about it and wanted to write a poem. As for the waterfalls line, that is part of the forest, but also part of the bathroom where the setting takes place, like water rushing in. I wanted to capture the idea of seclusion, and of being alone by connecting the image of a waterfall to a lonely bathroom. "Siege the forest", I dunno what I was thinking, I guess it does sound violent, so maybe I'll just delete it or clarify. I just liked the way it sounded lol. Hopefully this clears up some confusion over the poem :)

Thanks again for the comments. I'll maybe add an update later with some of the suggestions, I was sort of busy today :)