Long Story

[hesawacko]

He wore a duffel coat
so did she

They looked cute
walking in Regents Park
that Autumn
in their matching green wellies

When he left her
he packed only pockets
bundled together
with toggles and loops

I do like the mood you evoke.  It does seem to end rather suddenly, and i don't quite understand why they're matching.  For me, it feels like we're missing the poignancy of their matching, and the emotion of him leaving - and the reason(s) why?  Or the big theme of the poem?  Is this a mother and child? (or am I searching too hard?)  Maybe a title that gives a clue might be the key to help tie it together...