Aunty Had a Stroke

[kolemath]

Her body slipped sideways
Stayed there not sure about all the capitalization but i guess that's preference. something about typeface i once read a poet complain

She gurgled as if she were this line break works for me
Reciting a love poem why love poem? i love 'poem... through a storm drain' in any case
Through a storm drain

Never complained
Nor did she forgive you could cut here. 'nor forgave'

She plowed her mind
Ahead of her wheelchair
Gray hair electrified
With aftershocks a strange image of electrocution i'm not sure fits the image?

Burning rubber all the way good closing line