12-07-2016, 07:01 AM
I get the super specific titles are of personal taste. Reminds me of taxonomy. I actually appreciate this one saying rhyme though, because the last line is so disappointing to the flow, fitting to the subject matter, even if I think the narrators a jerk (focusing on looks then calling them stupid). I feel it would read a bit easier with a line break after the first four lines, and before the last three. In my opinion, pretty fun read
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