I don't have a name for this!!

[Coquette16]

I'm curious to hear (no pun intended) what type of music you would use to accompany this! It certainly has rhythm, but the overall theme is not evident. What I imagine when I'm reading, is a tent of an Egyptian prince, surrounded by gold-plated guards and filled with richly colored decorated women fawning over the prince...perhaps later in the evening, there is a special encounter with a specific lady...?

You could definitely take the imagery to a stronger place by working on the structure of the poem to make the theme more pronounced.

-Coquette16

Hiyah everybody! This is my first poem I've posted on here but feel free to give it as much critique as it needs! I really hope yall like it! It is kinda sexy and the style is inspired by a band that I like. Maybe sometime I'll set it to music.



Mossy forests
Fondle soft
Feathered chorists
Secret loft
Sylvan bed-tents
Dreamt dances
Unveiled consents
Real-life trances
Hear a whisper
Oak awnings
Lifting drifter
"Fly attendings."
Blush hover
Sopping idle
"Come my lover."
Drenched tidal
Bay appointed
Firm steady
Dye anointed
Yield heady
Gentle impress
Echo relish
Weld obsess
Revel plenish
Whorl ascent
Solar rising
Wellness advent
Closure prizing.