Listening to Snowfall
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Thanks for the heads up CRNDLSM,
 I never noticed it.
Will fix it.



(12-04-2016, 05:59 AM)CRNDLSM Wrote:  I appreciate the format, this is a very nice read.  You say 'there are' twice really close to each other and it seems a little too blatant of a descriptor.  Seems an unnecessary repetition.  Good work!
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Messages In This Thread
Listening to Snowfall - by Sparkydashforth - 12-02-2016, 02:42 AM
RE: Listening to Snowfall - by Keith - 12-02-2016, 03:30 AM
RE: Listening to Snowfall - by Sparkydashforth - 12-02-2016, 03:46 AM
RE: Listening to Snowfall - by Sparkydashforth - 12-02-2016, 12:38 PM
RE: Listening to Snowfall - by CRNDLSM - 12-04-2016, 05:59 AM
RE: Listening to Snowfall - by Sparkydashforth - 12-04-2016, 06:47 AM



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