Me and you
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Achebe,

It would certainly smooth the line. I had "wouldn't" there for the alliteration, but it is more clumsy.

Thanks,

dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Me and you - by Erthona - 11-18-2016, 08:22 PM
RE: Me and you - by ellajam - 11-18-2016, 09:19 PM
RE: Me and you - by rayheinrich - 11-18-2016, 10:12 PM
RE: Me and you - by Sparkydashforth - 11-18-2016, 11:22 PM
RE: Me and you - by just mercedes - 11-19-2016, 06:50 AM
RE: Me and you - by Erthona - 11-19-2016, 11:00 PM
RE: Me and you - by RiverNotch - 11-19-2016, 11:26 PM
RE: Me and you - by Erthona - 11-20-2016, 09:28 AM
RE: Me and you - by Achebe - 11-20-2016, 06:49 PM
RE: Me and you - by Erthona - 11-24-2016, 10:46 PM



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