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how it begins
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11-23-2016, 04:11 AM
You've got green, a worm, a winnower.... There's enough there to make an agriculture reference... I am talking about the transition between the two halves of the poem.... Maybe it seemed lazy to me because that wasn't your intent.... I know what you meant them to be, I thought perhaps you were attempting a metaphor...
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how it begins - by Lizzie - 11-22-2016, 01:28 PM
RE: how it begins - by QDeathstar - 11-23-2016, 02:10 AM
RE: how it begins - by Lizzie - 11-23-2016, 03:03 AM
RE: how it begins - by Sparkydashforth - 11-23-2016, 02:16 AM
RE: how it begins - by QDeathstar - 11-23-2016, 04:11 AM
RE: how it begins - by Lizzie - 11-23-2016, 04:33 AM
RE: how it begins - by QDeathstar - 11-23-2016, 04:49 AM
RE: how it begins - by Lizzie - 11-23-2016, 11:28 AM
RE: how it begins - by Achebe - 11-23-2016, 04:53 AM
RE: how it begins - by Lizzie - 09-15-2023, 08:54 AM
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