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how it begins
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11-23-2016, 02:10 AM
I like the cadence and sound of the poem. I think the title is weak. Titles with pronouns generally are. I can see the abandonment of the allusions to agriculture in the second half of the poem (moving to planes and tech (yeah, voicemail is mundane tech) paralleling his abandonment of it as well, but it reads sort of lazy to me.
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how it begins - by Lizzie - 11-22-2016, 01:28 PM
RE: how it begins - by QDeathstar - 11-23-2016, 02:10 AM
RE: how it begins - by Lizzie - 11-23-2016, 03:03 AM
RE: how it begins - by Sparkydashforth - 11-23-2016, 02:16 AM
RE: how it begins - by QDeathstar - 11-23-2016, 04:11 AM
RE: how it begins - by Lizzie - 11-23-2016, 04:33 AM
RE: how it begins - by QDeathstar - 11-23-2016, 04:49 AM
RE: how it begins - by Lizzie - 11-23-2016, 11:28 AM
RE: how it begins - by Achebe - 11-23-2016, 04:53 AM
RE: how it begins - by Lizzie - 09-15-2023, 08:54 AM
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