11-22-2016, 12:09 PM
Oh my gosh!! Thank you so much for replying!
Yes, the fact that it's vague and you're not exactly sure what's going on and where the poem is going is intentional. I guess in that way it isn't a usual poem. It isn't one with a specific story or theme or anything. It is more of a compilation of good sounding words and rhythms that convey feeling. Do you think that's okay?
Yes, the phrases kind of run together more like long words.
Yes, the fact that it's vague and you're not exactly sure what's going on and where the poem is going is intentional. I guess in that way it isn't a usual poem. It isn't one with a specific story or theme or anything. It is more of a compilation of good sounding words and rhythms that convey feeling. Do you think that's okay?
Yes, the phrases kind of run together more like long words.
(11-22-2016, 12:04 PM)CRNDLSM Wrote: In a general understanding of language i interpret phrases almost as really long words. In a way this reads like a rhyming word association exercise. The word choices and rhythms I have no problem with, but other than having fun with words I can't tell what you're saying?