waiting for the snow

[Sparkydashforth]

we're waiting for the snow to fall quiet
like a poem's beginning.....................nicely said. Brings a quiet ambience at the beginning of the work.

bringing relief from the rain
and the blustery wind
from the slip of rotting leaves............good illustrative lines.

from the strain of change...............don't really get this.

we're waiting to trundle
through undulating drifts
across fallow fields..................good images

inward as a daydream
as an icy lake........................love the last lines --really takes the poem to a meditative level.