(11-18-2016, 12:38 PM)Coquette16 Wrote: Dark Waters
Heart capsized
No longer drifting.
Further and further away
Swims reality.
Submerged, discouraged,
Eyes blurred,
Limbs slicing,
Dark waters
Enticing the unclaimed depths.
Mindless pressure
Pulsing
In the mirror
of distortion
surrounding me.
Heart capsized
No longer drifting.
Further and further away
Swims reality.
Heart capsized is a good start, automatically I think I'm about to read a 'love is scary' poem, but if you are really lost at sea, like a desert everything is a mirage, and reality slips away with hope, and your heart capsized. I like this tight package too even the refrain. Thanks for posting!
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