11-19-2016, 06:50 AM
I like this, but I wonder what the 'looking very nice' has to do with advice. Apart from a great rhyme. I too like 'the us in my head', agree with ella about the comma.
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Me and you - by Erthona - 11-18-2016, 08:22 PM
RE: Me and you - by ellajam - 11-18-2016, 09:19 PM
RE: Me and you - by rayheinrich - 11-18-2016, 10:12 PM
RE: Me and you - by Sparkydashforth - 11-18-2016, 11:22 PM
RE: Me and you - by just mercedes - 11-19-2016, 06:50 AM
RE: Me and you - by Erthona - 11-19-2016, 11:00 PM
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RE: Me and you - by Erthona - 11-20-2016, 09:28 AM
RE: Me and you - by Achebe - 11-20-2016, 06:49 PM
RE: Me and you - by Erthona - 11-24-2016, 10:46 PM
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