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So much that can be said
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11-19-2016, 12:03 AM
This may sound mean, I hope it doesn't, I think you should not have the repetition in the last line in the stanzas because more could be said to give the reader a new feeling. Overall, I think you did a wonderful job on this, very much thought out and very true. We often have little time to say things that we want or even need to say.
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So much that can be said - by Mark Cecil - 11-16-2016, 10:59 AM
RE: So much that can be said - by CRNDLSM - 11-18-2016, 07:03 AM
RE: So much that can be said - by Mark Cecil - 11-18-2016, 07:04 AM
RE: So much that can be said - by ellajam - 11-18-2016, 10:12 PM
RE: So much that can be said - by OwenRich - 11-19-2016, 12:03 AM
RE: So much that can be said - by billy - 11-20-2016, 03:02 PM
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