To Give is to Gain

[Sparkydashforth]

The repeat of accrete feels very precious to me, as if the word
were somehow vital to the poems imagery, but if that were so,
you might have explored the meaning of 'growing together' more
adroitly.
Having said this, its a good effort, and worth a few revisions
Stanza 2 is far too saccharine for me though.