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Total Recoil
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11-13-2016, 07:57 AM
In regards to the punctuation I think the comma is a mistake it shouldn't be there. Overall I think I'll stick to a metre seven syllables each line so in regards to the last line I'll keep it the way it is. I've made these changes in my second edit
Poetry is the unexpected utterance of the soul
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Total Recoil - by Mark Cecil - 11-04-2016, 08:34 AM
RE: Total Recoil - by dukealien - 11-04-2016, 12:17 PM
RE: Total Recoil - by Mark Cecil - 11-06-2016, 02:43 AM
RE: Total Recoil - by RiverNotch - 11-09-2016, 12:34 AM
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