entertaining

[Lizzie]

1. I would just say "I am quieting" in the first line. This is probably true.
2.drop "into" in the second line
3.I think the line about letting you drive distracts from the "body" image you were evoking That's a good point, thank you.
4.I would just say "I did everything with myself in mind"
5. comma after (now)
6. not sure I would use "me" twice in the same line

I liked this poem, the images are vivid

Thank you for the comments, richard. You have some good points.

Take care,

lizziep