To Give is to Gain

[Brownlie]

Seems pretty good. 

The sun rises just a little bit higher -- just and a little bit may be redundant
the crimson pink rose petal accretes a drop of dew -- Do you need crimson and pink?
the wind pushes the branches
the ground gains a new leaf
a new bud sprouts from the ground -- Repeated the word ground in two lines next to eachother.
corn is harvested by the bushel -- passive voice corn "is." plus is might not be the strongest verb here. 
snow accumulates on the mountain tops.
 
The world sees a new baby's face
the parent emits more love than thought possible
a kind word gives hope
laughter fills a room
a dog rolls over and kisses its owner
 
Coffee drips down into the pot -- do you need "down." dripping always moves downard doesn't it?
a breath out
a breath in
 
To accrete is to gain
oxygen in a brain
hope through the pain.

I  liked it. Gave some comments on style.