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11-11-2016, 01:02 PM

(11-10-2016, 10:34 AM)BecktheDog Wrote: If you are able to keep that imagery up through the rest of the poem, I think this poem will improve.

I think you're right. Smile

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entertaining - by Lizzie - 11-05-2016, 05:24 AM

RE: entertaining - by CRNDLSM - 11-05-2016, 06:09 AM

RE: entertaining - by Lizzie - 11-05-2016, 02:27 PM

RE: entertaining - by Ton Romus - 11-06-2016, 03:26 AM

RE: entertaining - by Lizzie - 11-06-2016, 03:17 PM

RE: entertaining - by RiverNotch - 11-07-2016, 10:47 PM

RE: entertaining - by Lizzie - 11-12-2016, 12:14 AM

RE: entertaining - by BecktheDog - 11-10-2016, 10:34 AM

RE: entertaining - by Lizzie - 11-11-2016, 01:02 PM

RE: entertaining - by richard michael - 11-12-2016, 10:38 PM

RE: entertaining - by Lizzie - 11-13-2016, 07:22 AM

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