11-07-2016, 11:02 PM
(11-06-2016, 04:15 AM)CRNDLSM Wrote: What about instead of 'around and around' each time you say something different and equivalent, like 'endless circles', 'always revolving', something different each time
While this could easily jump off the cliff of cuteness; if done properly, it's a great idea.
(This said, my earlier suggestion fits my brain better -- oh, wait, it ain't my poem, it's yours. Go for it, dude.)
all this useless beauty... but what the hell, why not?

