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[Lizzie]

~Ton. Like "Don." But with a T. OK?

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Yeah, I'll work on the descriptors. I'm not sure that I've found the right language yet for the concepts I'm trying to convey. Thanks for the feedback, this one might take a couple of edits to materialize.

An aside about the indenting: I had a notion to line up you/me/I etc. to mimic the merging of the people....it doesn't appear to be working visually, but sometimes I just try things to see what works and what doesn't.

Thanks again for taking the time.

Cheers,

lizziep