indiana vanilla
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Howdy,

And folksy ham shakes all around. I'm new in these parts but
rather old in others. Certainly enjoyed your piece and
red those other crits etc. so I decided to offer
some blue that might be viable or
please ignore whatever and/or
feel free to use anything
if you like...

no one warned us young women
of midwestern cornfields
we would become this bored

or maybe they did and we blanked them out
because their words taste like cool whip
jello and marshmallow salad

because their creased khakis and clairol ash
blonde hair broadcast ranch dressing as
clear as abstinence on christian radio

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indiana vanilla - by Lizzie - 11-01-2016, 03:04 PM
RE: indiana vanilla - by kolemath - 11-02-2016, 09:29 AM
RE: indiana vanilla - by Lizzie - 11-03-2016, 11:02 AM
RE: indiana vanilla - by RiverNotch - 11-03-2016, 11:26 PM
RE: indiana vanilla - by Lizzie - 11-05-2016, 01:14 PM
RE: indiana vanilla - by Ton Romus - 11-05-2016, 06:56 AM
RE: indiana vanilla - by Lizzie - 11-05-2016, 01:38 PM
RE: indiana vanilla - by Achebe - 11-05-2016, 01:27 PM
RE: indiana vanilla - by Sparkydashforth - 11-17-2016, 04:30 AM
RE: indiana vanilla - by Lizzie - 11-17-2016, 06:11 AM



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