entertaining
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(11-05-2016, 05:24 AM)lizziep Wrote:  i'm quieting down
receding into the corners

unzipping my skin

allowing you in
                 i'm entertainingthis block sucked me in, like entertaining guests, but the first block makes you seem too introverted for entertaining 

i let you drivecliche? still nice

i used to do everything
with myself in mind

now i sustain you
              you're my skeleton nice even Rhymes with let you in and skin.

if you become me then what becomes of me?could do without this line, you are 'one' now

loving you is my way of flirting
with death I love this ending, driving can be very dangerous


Reinstating this one because I ticked Dale off by deleting it out of a critical forum after it had been seen. Sorry to anyone else slightly to seriously annoyed with my deleting tendencies. It won't happen as much now that I know (and knowing is half the battle Wink ).
Peanut butter honey banana sandwiches
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Messages In This Thread
entertaining - by Lizzie - 11-05-2016, 05:24 AM
RE: entertaining - by CRNDLSM - 11-05-2016, 06:09 AM
RE: entertaining - by Lizzie - 11-05-2016, 02:27 PM
RE: entertaining - by Ton Romus - 11-06-2016, 03:26 AM
RE: entertaining - by Lizzie - 11-06-2016, 03:17 PM
RE: entertaining - by RiverNotch - 11-07-2016, 10:47 PM
RE: entertaining - by Lizzie - 11-12-2016, 12:14 AM
RE: entertaining - by BecktheDog - 11-10-2016, 10:34 AM
RE: entertaining - by Lizzie - 11-11-2016, 01:02 PM
RE: entertaining - by richard michael - 11-12-2016, 10:38 PM
RE: entertaining - by Lizzie - 11-13-2016, 07:22 AM



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