Total Recoil
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2nd edition
I shot birds with my dad’s gun
But the weapon was no fun
For it made an awful sound
And left me upon the ground
Such was the force of dad’s gun

1st edition
I shot birds with my dad’s gun
But the weapon was no fun
For it made a terrible sound,
And left me on the ground
Such was the force of dad’s gun
Poetry is the unexpected utterance of the soul 

Mark Nepo
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Total Recoil - by Mark Cecil - 11-04-2016, 08:34 AM
RE: Total Recoil - by dukealien - 11-04-2016, 12:17 PM
RE: Total Recoil - by Mark Cecil - 11-06-2016, 02:43 AM
RE: Total Recoil - by RiverNotch - 11-09-2016, 12:34 AM
RE: Total Recoil - by Mark Cecil - 11-13-2016, 07:57 AM



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