Say Something
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(11-04-2016, 02:10 AM)kolemath Wrote:  Say Something

I wrote a verse
then erased it.

Here it is. 



                                       Do you like it?
                                       The silence?  The purity of space?

                                       The blather doesn't blah-blah
                                       the space of what you say.
I kole! I really like this except that one line. I wouldn't try to define the empty space at all. I hate the word 'purity' in any context except in the chemistry lab.

It seems to be poking a little bit of fun at the self-centeredness of the reader. Of us all, really.   Thumbsup
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Messages In This Thread
Say Something - by kolemath - 11-04-2016, 02:10 AM
RE: Say Something - by Lizzie - 11-04-2016, 03:55 AM
RE: Say Something - by kolemath - 11-04-2016, 09:56 PM
RE: Say Something - by ellajam - 11-04-2016, 06:03 AM
RE: Say Something - by kolemath - 11-04-2016, 09:09 AM
RE: Say Something - by RiverNotch - 11-09-2016, 12:28 AM
RE: Say Something - by Ton Romus - 11-09-2016, 05:07 AM



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