10-31-2016, 12:35 PM
This might be a bit of a weak critique, but I actually got a very personal message from this poem. The last few lines, saying you'll bloom and be seen, makes it sound self centered. It's beautiful though. Up until that point, the entire poem was about how everything is interconnected. Which brings it together to me. It really seems more like an analogy for two people realizing, or waiting to realize what they are to eachother, and how they can both see how brilliant they each are.