10-31-2016, 11:56 AM
Rhyme with meter works well , such as,
"At the races (two feet of trochee)
Greyhounds pumping hungry faces" (four feet of trochee)
Without, not so much.
Also "Streaks down family's down" "Down" so close together is disruptive to the reading.
Best,
dale
"At the races (two feet of trochee)
Greyhounds pumping hungry faces" (four feet of trochee)
Without, not so much.
Also "Streaks down family's down" "Down" so close together is disruptive to the reading.
Best,
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.