Free Standing
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Is this one of a series? The only part I do not like is 'enjoying only yourself' because she looks lonely, biting her cheek,crossing legs anxiously, if she is enjoying herself, the rest doesn't make sense. It sounds like the writer is lonely, projecting... being alone not lonely,
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Free Standing - by 71degrees - 10-29-2016, 11:30 PM
RE: Free Standing - by CRNDLSM - 10-30-2016, 04:20 AM
RE: Free Standing - by 71degrees - 10-30-2016, 06:09 AM
RE: Free Standing - by Achebe - 10-30-2016, 07:27 PM
RE: Free Standing - by 71degrees - 10-31-2016, 11:40 AM
RE: Free Standing - by Lizzie - 10-31-2016, 01:10 AM



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