The Autocrat

[Todd]

I think Ella gave you some solid feedback and pointed out the issue of the final line. 

Though it gives a sense of symmetry it isn't surprising enough. A possible fix might be something like this:

Dad put his feet up
on the table after he ate,

He leaned back in his chair and belched,
unbuttoned his pants
and picked his teeth
like a fat cat
done controlling the dish.

We'd finish the meal
smelling the farm on his soles.

I didn't include Ella's changes though I agree with them. I took your Line 3 and moved it to the end. I exchanged staring for smelling to engage a different sense (one that felt more appropriate for manure). 

Just something to think about.

Best,

Todd