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[HaleINthewind]

CRNDLSM- Thank you for your critique. I definitely like the suggestion of ditching the and and into. To doesn't work for me though, through however does. I think that still does the job of cutting the clunkiness. Also as much as I would like to say I did it on purpose I didn't even notice the alliteration at the end in the original. Thanks it does sound nicer aloud. I was trying to fix any clarity issues with the end.

Thanks you for your time! Definitely gonna put this to use.