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[HaleINthewind]

Maybe if you think the bird reference is too direct you could show it with more subtle details. Instead of just saying 'bird' maybe showing it through smaller details of its features.

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But sometimes direct is good. You don't have to overpoetize.

Thanks I may play around with that ! That is where I get hung up Knowing when its okay to be blunt or when its " showing not telling" my biggest enemy ( besides spelling) I know the "Myth:" is suposed to be direct needs it, so yeah I may play around see what works best.