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Andy Kaufman

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10-26-2016, 01:43 AM

Maybe if you think the bird reference is too direct you could show it with more subtle details. Instead of just saying 'bird' maybe showing it through smaller details of its features.

But sometimes direct is good. You don't have to overpoetize.

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Parents *Edit 1 - by HaleINthewind - 10-26-2016, 12:42 AM

RE: Parents - by rowens - 10-26-2016, 01:04 AM

RE: Parents - by HaleINthewind - 10-26-2016, 01:25 AM

RE: Parents - by rowens - 10-26-2016, 01:31 AM

RE: Parents - by HaleINthewind - 10-26-2016, 01:38 AM

RE: Parents - by rowens - 10-26-2016, 01:43 AM

RE: Parents - by HaleINthewind - 10-26-2016, 01:53 AM

RE: Parents - by MadelineAnne - 10-26-2016, 07:46 PM

RE: Parents - by HaleINthewind - 10-26-2016, 11:46 PM

RE: Parents - by CRNDLSM - 10-27-2016, 10:42 AM

RE: Parents - by HaleINthewind - 10-27-2016, 12:16 PM

RE: Parents *Edit 1 - by Krakus - 10-31-2016, 12:47 PM

RE: Parents *Edit 1 - by HaleINthewind - 11-01-2016, 01:43 AM

RE: Parents *Edit 1 - by Mark Cecil - 11-03-2016, 04:23 AM

RE: Parents *Edit 1 - by mitsuch - 11-03-2016, 09:25 PM

RE: Parents *Edit 1 - by starlight - 11-06-2016, 12:37 PM

RE: Parents *Edit 1 - by Emz - 11-08-2016, 09:55 PM

RE: Parents *Edit 1 - by HaleINthewind - 11-22-2016, 11:29 AM

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