10-21-2016, 10:14 AM
(10-21-2016, 10:04 AM)newmystic Wrote: what a lovely and helpful critique. I agree with the need for punctuation. I'm thankful for your kind words as well. sometimes you don't know if what you create will seem awful.Ha, true dat, but everything's a starting point. I'm sure others will be by with more thorough critique; even if it's harsh run with it and use it to focus your aim. Hope you have fun editing, it's difficult but rewarding.
Matthew
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