Achebe's comment on Rhyme
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(10-20-2016, 05:42 AM)Pdeathstar Wrote:  Rhyming is ok, but I think if you are writing about something serious rhyming doesn't work. If you're writing for some joyous occasion, rhyme away... But, if your writing about the death of an unborn fetus, rhyming will never work.

Abort


The doc got to work
and with a bit of a jerk,
pulled out parts of a fetus
that looked like uncle Cletus.


Maybe it does work?
Lemme try dis.


Texan Abortion Clinic


hard to choose?
hard to lose
woman's health?
got no wealth
heaven's lyre?
hanger wire
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Messages In This Thread
Achebe's comment on Rhyme - by ellajam - 10-17-2016, 07:29 PM
RE: Achebe's comment on Rhyme - by CRNDLSM - 10-17-2016, 08:27 PM
RE: Achebe's comment on Rhyme - by dukealien - 10-17-2016, 10:12 PM
RE: Achebe's comment on Rhyme - by CRNDLSM - 10-17-2016, 11:04 PM
RE: Achebe's comment on Rhyme - by Leanne - 10-18-2016, 05:02 AM
RE: Achebe's comment on Rhyme - by Achebe - 10-18-2016, 06:36 AM
RE: Achebe's comment on Rhyme - by Leanne - 10-18-2016, 07:07 AM
RE: Achebe's comment on Rhyme - by just mercedes - 10-18-2016, 07:29 AM
RE: Achebe's comment on Rhyme - by Leanne - 10-18-2016, 09:26 AM
RE: Achebe's comment on Rhyme - by billy - 10-18-2016, 11:13 AM
RE: Achebe's comment on Rhyme - by Achebe - 10-18-2016, 04:39 PM
RE: Achebe's comment on Rhyme - by Erthona - 10-19-2016, 05:43 AM
RE: Achebe's comment on Rhyme - by zorcas - 10-20-2016, 04:18 AM
RE: Achebe's comment on Rhyme - by Achebe - 10-20-2016, 05:29 AM
RE: Achebe's comment on Rhyme - by QDeathstar - 10-20-2016, 05:42 AM
RE: Achebe's comment on Rhyme - by RiverNotch - 10-20-2016, 11:25 AM
RE: Achebe's comment on Rhyme - by Leanne - 10-20-2016, 06:07 AM
RE: Achebe's comment on Rhyme - by zorcas - 10-20-2016, 09:46 AM
RE: Achebe's comment on Rhyme - by just mercedes - 10-20-2016, 11:05 AM
RE: Achebe's comment on Rhyme - by zorcas - 10-21-2016, 05:24 AM
RE: Achebe's comment on Rhyme - by CRNDLSM - 10-20-2016, 06:41 AM
RE: Achebe's comment on Rhyme - by Quixilated - 10-20-2016, 07:17 AM
RE: Achebe's comment on Rhyme - by QDeathstar - 10-20-2016, 11:13 PM
RE: Achebe's comment on Rhyme - by Leanne - 10-21-2016, 05:34 AM
RE: Achebe's comment on Rhyme - by ellajam - 10-21-2016, 10:00 AM
RE: Achebe's comment on Rhyme - by rayheinrich - 10-21-2016, 06:07 PM
RE: Achebe's comment on Rhyme - by Leanne - 10-21-2016, 07:26 PM
RE: Achebe's comment on Rhyme - by billy - 10-21-2016, 08:17 PM
RE: Achebe's comment on Rhyme - by Achebe - 10-21-2016, 08:24 PM
RE: Achebe's comment on Rhyme - by billy - 10-21-2016, 10:00 PM
RE: Achebe's comment on Rhyme - by Quixilated - 10-21-2016, 11:13 PM
RE: Achebe's comment on Rhyme - by Lizzie - 10-22-2016, 05:02 AM
RE: Achebe's comment on Rhyme - by ellajam - 10-21-2016, 11:23 PM
RE: Achebe's comment on Rhyme - by Erthona - 10-22-2016, 01:51 AM
RE: Achebe's comment on Rhyme - by rayheinrich - 10-24-2016, 10:12 AM



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