10-20-2016, 12:01 AM
It's not nonsensical! As has been said before, artists turn all things to smut, and an aroused man is a homely man.
But cheese, now I'm reading it like that. As for what I get, I get a sense of almost-feeling, but I can't be sure if it's one kind of resentment or another, whether the speaker is being wry or sad. And "foreign men" -- I mean, it's not comforting, but somehow it sounds positive, it's the introduction of something new, something perhaps better -- unknowns don't necessarily mean bad things, especially under the Christmas tree. Basically, the whole piece feels like a puzzle, only it's not, its story and everything is so clear -- but not clear in the sense of an image being concretely there, it's a senryu -- such that the feeling, I can't be sure if it's good or not.
But cheese, now I'm reading it like that. As for what I get, I get a sense of almost-feeling, but I can't be sure if it's one kind of resentment or another, whether the speaker is being wry or sad. And "foreign men" -- I mean, it's not comforting, but somehow it sounds positive, it's the introduction of something new, something perhaps better -- unknowns don't necessarily mean bad things, especially under the Christmas tree. Basically, the whole piece feels like a puzzle, only it's not, its story and everything is so clear -- but not clear in the sense of an image being concretely there, it's a senryu -- such that the feeling, I can't be sure if it's good or not.