The Irish Famine

[Reflection]

Is this about potato blight? It sounds like the country itself mourning over the state of the land, but then a narrator talking about the country, looks like you did this on purpose.   And if potatoes have nothing to do with it, I can see how greed can be the cause for lament.  The spiritual famine.  It seems as though your primary focus was elaborating on the majestic scenery and deplorable state of affairs, which can only be aided by proper punctuation.  I can feel what youre saying here I think because I love my country, and Ireland too, already.  Anyways, I like it cause it's short and sweet

Thanks CRNDLSM

Yes I wrote this with the thoughts of the spiritual side of the famine "her hills her mountains her valleys her streams her rivers that run with no borders between"  although there is one line which i wasn't to sure how to end but i went with "minds"  because of that spiritual side "In a hell created by your evil minds"  I did think of "greed" or "deeds"  but "minds" i think has a better connection and close level with spiritual, as for proper punctuation, I like to use words that has a continuation of flow, a freedom to understand.

I have a spoken word song of this but been new here im not to sure about the rules of posting, thanks.